Tuesday, April 11, 2006

Kodaikkanal...


Kodaikkanal.. 5 am.

The first rays of the sun escaped through the thick morning fog. The rooster made its customary cock-a-doodle-doo to wake up the neighborhood. The love birds on the trees fell in love all over again. A whiff of fresh air blew across the hill threatening to take Shreya's dupatta its prisoner. She caught hold of her dupatta just as the orange piece of cloth rubbed across Vijay's face.. Her perfume mixed with the light morning mist and played around with his senses... He smiled.. It was one of those things he loved about Shreya.. Her smell was enough to intoxicate him..

His grip on her hand tightened.. It was two years to the day since he professed his love for her. The only girl he had ever loved. His sweetheart. The first thing he noticed in her were her lips.. He turned to look at her. They were still as beautiful as they were two years ago. The curves would give any miss universe a run for her money. Her smile was enough to knock any guy out of his senses. He came closer and kissed her on her lips. It lasted a whole minute.

"Thanks", he said.. "It reminded me of the first time I met you"...

"It still feels like the first time", she replied..

He met her eyes with his. Happiness and sorrow were mixed in an enchanting cocktail. Her eyes spoke a thousand words that only he could hear.

The sun moved aside its facade to look at the lovers.. Who was prettier, the sun or Shreya, one would never know. Vijay stood up and Shreya followed suit. Hand in hand they took a stroll around the park, admiring the morning beauty.

"I'll miss you", she said..

"So will I, honey".. he said as a tear rolled down his cheek.

They walked the entire walkway, still holding each other's hands and without speaking a word all the while. Words were trivial when hearts were speaking. The two finished their stroll and stood next to one another. The silence was loud. He could hear his heart beat. They looked at each other. Her eyes were still misty. Vijay had regained his composure. He looked down... Her lips.. Her luscious lips.. He kissed her again... Heaven!

Together, they took a step forward...

The sun went dark for a moment. Time froze. The chirping birds stood shocked. Suicide point had gained two more victims. All that one heard were two faint *thuds*....

18 comments:

Ramya Shankar said...

Hi, 1st time here ! Beautifully crafted post! :o)

DreamClicks said...

Punnagai mannan hangover plus barathiraja effect (everything freezing for a moment!!) LOL! Well-written though.

Why is that someone or the other is being killed of late? Just this morning, read Shiv's 'Love eternal'..

harry said...

dei ,
why do u always have to kill or seperate ..for a change let them unite at least once..thats a request from your fan number 1..

Gladtomeetin said...

Nice Write up...But a Bad Concept of love :-((

Shiv said...

Vikki,....Ippdi annyaayamaa konnutyee..anyways..Join the gang...aana inimel naan ennoda herova!! ;) kolrathaa illa...Happily ever after thaan..:)

Shiv said...

:@DV : Ippdi sad endings kathaila nadakkalam..Nijathula nadanthaa thaan thappu..so we leave all the sogams to the stories..cos r lives are too romantic and successful..illaya Vikki..*Wink* *Smiles and Dreams*

J said...

nicely written! "The silence was loud" -- I liked this usage ra.

Unknown said...

kolakaaraa paavi :(

gP said...

Koodaikannal katreeeee....lalalallala...

Whoosh 2 said...

@Ramya: Thanks yaar.. do visit :)

Whoosh 2 said...

@DV: Idhu kolai vaaram! :P

Whoosh 2 said...

@Harry: Request considered.. Check out my next story out next week :)

Whoosh 2 said...

@gladtomeetin: Yeah, agreed. A very pathetic concept of love. But nevertheless, it happens a lot. Unfortunately.

Whoosh 2 said...

@Insomniax: Point taken da.. watch this space for more :)

Whoosh 2 said...

Shiva, naan eppo story aa aarambichaalum, happily ever after aa dhaan aarambippein.. aana eppodiyo ending la yaaraivaadhu konnudurein.. yen-nu therila :(

Whoosh 2 said...

Thanks J :)

Whoosh 2 said...

@Uma: ehehhe!

Whoosh 2 said...

@GP:background score aa?? nadakkatum nadakkatum ;)